Mark A, B, C, D in the comments to indicate the best revision for the following sentence:
[3] Whenever our family traveled over this mountain, if he was driving, we stopped for a bowl of Callahan’s famous minestrone soup.
A. Whenever our family traveled over this mountain, if my dad, was driving, we stopped for a bowl of Callahan’s famous minestrone soup.
B. Whenever our family traveled over this mountain, – if he was driving – we stopped for a bowl of Callahan’s famous minestrone soup.
C. Whenever our family traveled over this mountain, if my dad was driving, we stopped for a bowl of Callahan’s famous minestrone soup.
D. no change